One Last Chance for Brochure Feedback!

Due to an unforseen delay at Creative Printing that won't allow them to print my brochure for me until tomorrow morning, I have one last chance to modify my brochure before they print it.
Here's what I came up with after integrating Marilyn and Ed's advice on how to improve it.

Under Ed's suggestion to mess with the text-boxes by interrupting them with other objects and images, I played around with the shield a bit on the interior, so here's a shot of another possible interior layout:

If Marilyn or Ed is reading this, please, send me some feedback! I can change the file I'm printing up until 8:30 AM Thursday morning, so there's still time for last-minute changes.

Brochure Final Designs

Here are potentially my final designs for the brochure.

Exterior:

Interior:

Hopefully I've met with at least SOME form of success here.